Windows Update How To:- Guide

[DaveXP]

Hey Guys some of you will no i am writing a gudie on the Windows Update method and i have almost finshed it BUT i need some feedback first.

Windows Update Method Guide

1.)Can you understand it is it clear

2.)Improvements suggestions?

if you could just let me know what you think i wuld be greatful

Thanks

[GreenMachine]

Please accept this as constructive criticism. I have written a few guides ...

To restart the computer first we must make setup move the file which will restart as it will get deleted if its not as the remove setup files has to run before this so we need to add a command line which will move the restart file before remove setup files runs.

That is one single sentence. Sentences like this really need to be broken down to simpler elements. I consider myself to understand the subject already, but I have trouble making heads or tails of this one. Short, simple sentences are the key to effective documentation.

Also, there are a lot of people on this site, and the web in general, that do not speak english as a native language. There will certainly be confussion over the use of "no" instead of "know".

Aside from that, the idea of sharing and passing the knowledge can only be complemented. Don't be discouraged by my, or others, criticism.

[DaveXP]

GreenMachine that just what i want help me to make it much better than before!!

Thanks for being completely bold about it.